عنوان الموضوع : A poem to read
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A poem to read



Hi people...yesterday i was so bored,and i had nothing to do...so i thought to my self why not write a poem...hope you enjoy reading it...


today i asked my self.... how much i loved you...
and the answer was that i couldn't live without you for a second...
i thought to my self again and again and asked "what does he reckon?"
my love is growing each day stronger and stronger..
but are your feelings going further...
how can i stop doing things behind your back.....
believe me i wasnt like that before..and i never had...
when are going to come back????
am tired now...the pain in my heart is killing me..
am physically dying everyday...but no one sees me...
when are you going to come back???

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really , it's a good trial , and an honest feeling


keep on your hobby

but what the meaning of thought in ( so i thought to my self)

all of my best wishes


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انا كتير فرحانة لانك حبيت الشعر....... so i thought معناها انا فكرت..


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ok, so we should say : I thought why don't we write a poem

directly without : my self

did you get it?

regards


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No sweetie....unfortunately you are wrong ...cuz am talking as a singular not as a plural....PEACE


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لا أنا قصدي ان كلمة فكرت لا يأتي بعدها to my self

ولكنها تأتي مع said مثلا : I said to my self

أو told مثلا :I told my self

بينما thought تأتي مباشرة :I thought I can write my poem

هل فهمتي قصدي؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

تحيااااااااااااااااااااتي وبانتظار جديدك