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To my husband



You are my love and my heart beats when I saw you
My soul need you
The eye longs for the consideration of you
The body requests hugs
They were always to Atptad? close
I don't want to live without you
Attachment mercy on my heart
And lacrimal? descending
Let me tell you the thirst for your lips
I want you for me alone



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Dear is this your own writing ,

This is good, but it need some changes

Would you like me to edit it ?

Please reply in English


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Dear Old sure others want

And delighted to read an objective

Sincere greetings


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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ξ❤Ξ مستشارهΞ❤Ξ
Dear Old sure others want

And delighted to read an objective

Sincere greetings

Dear I didn't understand

What do you mean ?

Anyway I will correct the mistakes


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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ξ❤Ξ مستشارهΞ❤Ξ
To my husband



You are my love and my heart beating
Spirit needs you
The eye longs for the consideration you
The body requests hugs
They were always to Atptad close
Not the life of me without you
Attachment mercy on my heart
And lacrimal descending
Let me tell a thirst of your lips
I want you all your me alone
I love to madness

You are my love and my heart beats when I saw you
My soul need you
The eye longs for the consideration of you
The body requests hugs
They were always to Atptad? close
I don't want to live without you
Attachment mercy on my heart
And lacrimal? descending
Let me tell you the thirst for your lips
I want you for me alone

Dear you can see the changes in the red color

But I didn't understand some words

Keep on dear and practise , surley your writing will improve


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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة coolgurl
You are my love and my heart beats when I saw you
My soul need you
The eye longs for the consideration of you
The body requests hugs
They were always to Atptad? close
I don't want to live without you
Attachment mercy on my heart
And lacrimal? descending
Let me tell you the thirst for your lips
I want you for me alone

Dear you can see the changes in the red color

But I didn't understand some words

Keep on dear and practise , surley your writing will improve

Modified Thank you very much